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What These Eyes See

With these eyes, I look at thee
And see not what others see
Instead I see beneath the mask
To find out what, you need not ask
You need but look into your heart
To find out what you truly are
Your heart is black, far from divine
But shame on me, for so is mine.

My Angel

You are my angel,  and even though
Your skin may not be as white as snow
Your wings they are the deepest black
That would put to shame a witch’s cat
And instead of a halo, you have horns
The tips of which are sharp as thorns
You’re still my angel, and you should know
Whatever your destination, my soul will go.

Trapped

I feel I’m trapped, nowhere to go
Time quickly passes and flows
I look around, but can see nothing
Nor hear a sound, nor feel a sting
I believe that you will truly find
That I am trapped within my mind.

What Lies Within

In shadow, in darkness, beneath everyone's guise,
Past the flesh, through the bone, hidden with lies,
A face, a secret, that the world won't abide,
A demon, a nightmare, which we choose to hide.

Encroaching Shadow

The shadow approaches, full of malice and hate,
Will you cower and run, will you shiver and shake?
It engulfs all around it, consuming the light,
Will you be brave, will you stay there and fight?
May I suggest an alternative, a separate stand,
Reach out to the darkness, let it take you by the hand.
Some poems I wrote. Very short.
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pinkstunnaa Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I adore them all you are very remarkable!
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briellababycat123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'm in love with this poem it's so deep and descriptive!!! I love how u took the perspective of a demon being your angel proving that even the darkest noble of anything at all can be loved!!
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PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2015  Student General Artist
I love the short poem My Angel.
Very nice :)
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Hawkfrost64976 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Omg this is amazing! You should post so many more!!!
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billyjoe13 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hadn't realized this was a series of separate poems until I read the description. Tbh honest if you read as if it was one it makes an odd sort of sense. Anyway, Beautiful job. 
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derpyanddoccy Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
is it ok if i use one of your poems in a picture?
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Graveripper Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
Sure, I guess as long as you credit me in the comments.
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derpyanddoccy Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
grazie
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chaoticrainbow347 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014   Artist
*claps* that was beautiful!~ All of them :3
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Qwertynim Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student General Artist
I feel the mood.  Wow. U r awesome.
Can u give feedback and critique on some of my poems?  Ur just..awesome.
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j-death-k-scythe-c Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
These are all beautiful
I can really relate to all these poems you made
Very well done, keep up the good work!
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santina12 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
i like them your a talented poet 
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roneta8 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Love it
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sparkjet Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Student General Artist
nice poems, i bet your loner and the darkness of being alone and isolated envelopes your shining and brilliant world. just pray... GOD bless ^_^
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alygatorleigh Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
really amazing
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Blacksoulstar Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
U have amazing talent and a deep mind. use that to ur advantage. The world is full of people like u, so u are not alone.
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lexitaylor670 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
they are all really good!! my fave is the angel one.
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Vamppi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
I am in love with the Enroaching Shadow poem! May I ask that I use the first two lines in a manip of a horse that I am using?
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RainbowBlur Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god. This is just dark. darkdarkdark. How in the world did you think of this??? It's so... so.... wow. I cannot believe someone could actually think this up...
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xytheis Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome
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MusicCatt Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
They're so beautiful!
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Requiem4ThierDreams Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. Absolutely awesome.
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kittyOwO Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
so cool! OoO
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sleepwhenwere-dead Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
i really like them thank you for sharing!!!!!!
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mojondtriangles Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
WOW i hope i get as good as that soon i loveee it :)
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Niki63 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011   Artist
wow that is just wow
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FreeSpiritFly Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Absolutely perfecltly wonderful...the flow, the theme... really realllly amazing :)
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CurlyWhirly Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011
epic
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theoutcastgirl Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
they are all realy good
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sparks4eva13 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
i just love these. awesome.
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Holy Crap! These poems are amazing!!! I hope to get as good as that one day!
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PrettyAlkemy Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Student General Artist
I love the poem "What these eyes See."

May I use it as a theme for a photo?
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Graveripper Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011
Go ahead.
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PrettyAlkemy Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! I'll be sure to send you the link. :)
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RazorBlade1443 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
such beautiful poems you got there! >.<
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SoundlessWhispers Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I've fallen in love with your poems! They are very moving and the flow is continued effortlessly to the end. :)
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jinx-deadlove Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great poems your a wonderful poet
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CeaselessLove Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Very detailed!! Love the tone and visuality in these poems!! You're better tha Edgar Alle Poe by far to me!!!
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irapewerewolves Featured By Owner May 17, 2011
im so inlove with these.............
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Joedirtbeach Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
Most of these speak of inner demons that you ignore and the last is about empracing it. At least thats what I got out of it. They are very dark, but they speak the truth
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MoonlightOrchids Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great poem! Everything flows very nicely, and it always kind of keeps you on the edge of your mind, not sure what will happen, and not quite wanting to know. But of course you have to keep on reading, because the end really pulls it all together in a "last goodbye" type of thing. It's really good!
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darknessanddeath14 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
WOW! that was a good poem. i really liked. my poems arent that good anymore. i think i lost my flare, but this poem is reallly cool.
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smilexhoneyxx Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2009
Very moving,
good job! :]
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Zoey-Redbird Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
OHMYGOD I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!
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with-no-emotion Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
wow there good!
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sparkyjade Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It seems your poems have an edge that no one seems to notice. The vibe that these poems have been created for. Excellently brilliant, if you mind me saying.
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CountessBathori Featured By Owner May 16, 2008  Student Photographer
Those are lovely i love every single one ^_^
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Lil-Munchkin81 Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
Wow. Thes are amazing. I really like 'em!
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2008  Student Digital Artist
very nice poems.....
dark is alright some of the time
yet everyone have a light to shine
Darkness can erase the beauty of day
and life will forever be shades of gray
so can you; oh would you please
shine some of your light my way?
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zmson Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008
loved it, i wish i could write poems like these
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